Writing for Performance (Live from Boston)
You're good at art because you work hard at your art start with this podcast featuring Knightdale creators Joseph Inc and me. Jeffrey Craner each episode. We discuss a topic and then give you two assignments something to consume and something to create. Start with this writing for performance. Uh hard starting is if you want to start somewhere with this you can start heard this way back in two thousand five. I went to Chicago to see my friend Jen. She said she wanted to take me to see a show. She wouldn't tell me anything else about it. Just come see the show with me. She said and we have deep dish pizza seats Which is technically not pizza but congealed tomato soup in a bread bowl and then we went up to Andersonville to see the neo? futurists performance show called the infinite wrench. Although back then it was called too much. Light makes the baby go blind. I was thirty at the time and I had been writing most of my life and writing plays for at least he's ten years and I'll be honest. I have never seen anything like this show. There was no fourth wall. But it wasn't improv either. It was wadey serious sometimes sometimes It was also funny and weird sometimes and it all moved so fast thirty short plays performed in a random order competing leaving against a countdown clock set. For exactly one hour the performers were not actors or at least not acting parts that weren't really themselves and they played lead with the basics of storytelling audience involvement like a kid and sandbox building than destroying building than destroy. And I had never seen anything like it and these sixteen minutes changed how I thought about theater. Not just as an audience member but as a writer. I didn't want to write things just because they were good stories. Sir Because the language was compelling I wanted to write words created immediate action. I wanted to write scenes that acknowledge the presence of an audience. One of the first place perform that night in two thousand five at the NEO future area and Andersonville Chicago was what really shook me as a writer. It was so simple title so ingenious and it was called for no apparent reason and despite the late hour the neo futurist and the audience members sat down to an awkward continental gentle breakfast. I'm Jeffrey Craner. And I'm here by myself in my closet that doubles as a recording studio. What follows me is a recording of a live? Show that we did in Boston. The weekend of the pod Tales Conference joining me and Joseph on stage that night was neo futurist writer for the podcast unwell and the creator of that brilliant play i. I just mentioned boulevard Di all right. Let's get started. The Vogel is you try to get you excited working on your writing or your Political political work is that you were doing civil assignment at a time. 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I think we all work Rosa recognize this is ah that art. It's undercutting work in such working. Probably GonNa come on our youth so Resting on just recognizing that some of this is it's not you. It's this it's ten o'clock here at as as your hall bills I think because it's work as to when GOPHERS full job hours. A week isn't just it just totally Gary Oldman often saw to really experience Two Weekends A in China to work on of awfully Working today's might take us weekend on because you don't really it starts after yourself is allergic. Uh for y'all that is all this episode but your assignment is just beginning beginning head on over to start with this podcast dot com to join our membership community becoming a member allows you to share your assignments with other listeners. Talk about what sparking parking your creativity and hopefully find future collaborators. 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